Set in Stone #1

Inscription as written
 
Sleep tight my love, I’m on your side
Go gently on your journey, I’ll be your guide
Fear not the valley or the shadow of death
I’ll be in your heart as you take your next breath
 
Suggested rewrite (BG)
 
now rest in peace and worry not
it’s paid in full, this little plot
you’re out of time, you’re out of breath
some call it sleep, I call it death

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